Cadaver`s tale
Shall I set the scene for all of you? Alright. Well this dear friend is a tale of tragedy, sadness, hope, love, and loss. It is the tale, of Cadaver, the alicorn who was unlucky enough to be born the way he was. This takes place in a world where alicorns are looked down upon and shunned; they are viewed as a freak of nature. Not only will I tell you how he lived but I shall also tell you how he died. I must also warn you that this story is not for the faint of heart or pure of innocence, so please take the time and consider if you would still like to know about what happened to my dear friend, Cadaver.
Well now, let us start then shall we? Alright, 'In a nursery at the town hospital, a stallion is attempting to console his mare. She is grieving not at the loss of a foal, but at the gaining of Cadaver, an alicorn. ` So, here. We. Go.
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amazing story so far...
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